Friday, September 13, 2013

The Litte Bird by jasper

     One day wehn I was playing with the ball and the And when I was playing with the ball I saw a bird moving.                So I put down the ball and I went to look close to it  and then I start to freak out .                                                                                                                                                                           Then after I got water and I poured on the bird and then it staert move so I touched him . So after I touched him and it like me so I went and fed him and I  olso gave him a bath.  Then after all I saw him flying...
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  1. Miss Teaford's ClassSeptember 21, 2013 at 4:37 PM

    JASPER! You need to add some extra details! But it is still cool.

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  2. Miss Teaford's ClassSeptember 21, 2013 at 5:25 PM

    PSST! Jasper! write a comment to Elizabeth like she did to you!
    P.S. AWESOME STORY!








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